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Wasnt really ready for that saddening thought pattern
i can’t help but read the last verse as a jealous reflection that turns the whole poem sour. it was beautiful up until that point. now i just read the thought of a jealous person rejecting sharing in the warmth and happiness of the grandma.
Yes I agree, it darkens it.
not so much darkens it, more so it makes the author sound more interested in themselves than the happiness of their grandmother.
Also true. I still enjoy it though. We’re all selfish sometimes.
I agree it darkens it. Thanks for sharing
Ooooffff, not what I pulled up the poetry community on my phone for today, but I accept this grey gift 🩶
A little dark yeah.
